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Anon
3/25/25, 8:57 PM
Also, I am curious- how exactly are these alphas just going to tear up the place and run off? Wouldn't somebody well...notice? Or is that covered under magic? And as Tom said....are all the alphas who were there guilty? Or not? Yousef is absolutely enraged but he needs to calm down. Meanwhile poor Frank in all of this is just...forgotten. I know we'll be seeing him again. As for Yousef's visions....oh I don't like the sound of them. Did one of them have them running through the park? And Oakley....now really is not the time to shoot your stuff. Please don't. Then again, at least he means well. Our protagonists do need that much. Honestly the fact that pack politics are so violent and the fact that they chuck people into the park...honestly it's fascinating how they all haven't done infighting so badly they've all become non-sapient. Like what is stopping them from just...combusting on a mass scale into conflicts? Clearly coups and wolf kings can get deposed like nothing else. Even here we're seeing scheming against the king. And then there's that hunter....they're up to something. Honestly, I can't even blame said hunter at this point. Werewolves seem to just uniquely be really unstable and dangerous compared to other weres. Oakley does not seem anywhere near as wonky at times. On the other hand....something tells me these hunters go after more than just weres.

3/26/25, 3:10 AM
@[Anon](/user/show/10049352) I LIKE that werewolves are unstable. Perfect, these creatures are not. I see them as the anti-vampire; wait five hundred years for revenge? Howling Hell! A werewolf cannot wait five minutes!! They’re not completely animals, but they’re not completely men either. I like how their bestial nature makes their society unstable, messy, & volitile. And I hope you do too ;-)
Anon
3/25/25, 8:56 PM
Yeah....well Bill managed to mess everything up. I so wonder what he's wondering was going to happen- that everything would be fine? They've lost a pack member, their home is gone, and now they're being hunted. Lovely. I do think he's not making it out of this in a good state once the truth comes out. He clearly is staying mum. How long will that last though...I think Paul is going to start noticing things. Also, Toddson really needs to stop playing hardball. Does he want Yousef dead or what? Clearly he wants him for himself but boy did he not think anything through. Mullins is well...Mullins I guess. Paul at least is getting more acclimated to things, hopefully he isn't going to face worse. Ray really must have been feeling the stirrings badly but also he must really like Father Chavez. To confuse him as being god in that moment. Also, I'd have thought Ray would know god in christian tradition doesn't really...take consorts. I mean...unless we want to metaphorically assume Mary as one. But that's metaphorical. Anyway. It seems Father Chavez has saved Mo and Ray but for his own ends...and he's also trying to keep Yousef for himself as well. Seems like pack politics are about to blow. And it seems Father Chavez wishes to take Ray as his apprentice in a fashion. Perhaps Ray and Alpha Spencer (was that his name) can perhaps get away from all this madness. Or Spencer is wrecking the gym right now...

3/26/25, 12:28 AM
@[Anon](/user/show/10049352) I added some edits (now published) to make it more clear Ray’s wolfish brain increasingly is conflating / blending the Christian God with older deities (Zeus, Odin) who were VERY Randy indeed with their mortal male followers. I hope that will clarify my intentions. Didn’t mean to confuse.
3/25/25, 8:46 PM
This is so well written! Absolutely exceptional stuff – I hope there's more coming! Love the way you split the scenes and your writing style is really vivid! Thank you!
Anonymous
3/25/25, 7:02 AM
Please please please add another few chapters. I've read a lot of stories but none have made me this excited or on edge. I was constantly reading more and more. You are clearly an amazing writer. Keep up the good work. And I beg please wrote more this series. I think this is my new favorite!
3/24/25, 9:36 PM
One of the best chapters ever written in gay erotica. Fuck me what a ride! Your the man Jack.
3/24/25, 9:27 PM
I hope the story continues it's so gripping!
3/24/25, 8:58 PM
I love how gullable the white cocky QB is and can't wait to hear of his downfall and where it will take. A brilliant first chapter. Thanks
3/24/25, 1:09 AM
I wanted to say, first off, a huge congrats on the contest win! And second off, I'll say that I only got a chance to read this story a couple days ago—and _whew._ Orgasm control and hypnofiles and chastity are not typically my kinks. But I'm always a bit enchanted by stories that do a kink *so* well that the appeal is almost contagious (and suddenly you're like, "wait, maybe this _could_ be my kink too?"). The characters are fantastic and fun to read, and this was also a detailed and inspired take on the contest prompt, and seriously, hats off on this story. Incredible work. Now that the contest is over and new chapters can be posted again, I hope you're able to wrap things up and bring Connor to the story's conclusion (or continue things for however long you have planned, either one)! Either way: congrats again, and kudos!

3/24/25, 2:57 AM
@[Nu and the Nus](/user/show/25270) firstly 😲, and secondly 🥹? I'm definitely planning on continuing now the challenge is over, and my next couple of bits are already written! Honestly this was a lot of fun to write. And once again 🥹
3/24/25, 2:55 AM
Extremely excited for the next chapters, was unbelievably happy to see Rubber and Capes is back!
Anonymous
3/13/25, 12:35 AM
Very hot. Seems like the opportunity may have passed, but I'd love to see another day with daddy Logan and how well he responds to a locked Conner

3/24/25, 2:46 AM
@Anonymous We'll see how the next section goes, but the idea was to bring him back at least one more time...