You are really an incredible writer

Merry christmas indeed. I love these characters and i love your writing style. Excited to see where we go from here.

Another AMAZING chapter! I absolutely love both characters and I think every gay boy (myself included) needs a Chris in their life.

love this. I wish I am this bodybuilder.

Looking forward to more! 🍆🔒😈

Great start, hope Byron shows him the pleasure of a cigar real soon.

Hope this gets updated, I keep re-reading the story almost every week.

I've meant to post this for a while so here we go. I can't help but shake the feeling that this chapter and somewhat in the previous feels 'forced'. As if the chapters just don't sit right. Everything up to now has been polished smooth with a clear rhythm and progression that flowed. Not only were their some punctuation/grammatical errors that the editor should have corrected in this chapter. But what's happening to Jamie doesn't, and by extension this whole ordeal he is currently in, doesn't flow with the rest of the story. Above all, where and how is Jamie able to resist so hard? Why is he suddenly, now in this moment choosing to unleash his bottled anger? Jamie submitted to his Master. Fully. He symbiont is fully integrated with him. Therefore, Myriad should already have full awareness of Jamie's state of mind and physical condition. And can therefore correct at anytime. Which was proven when he went inside and took note of the mental dam in Jamie's psyche. Jamie shouldn't be able or have reason to be such a hard-ass to Dusk. Yet here he is fighting back tooth and nail over a collar? This doesn't add up. Granted, Jamie has been aware of the complicity and duality that Myriad operates under. He knows the corruption of the Association. He has several legitimate reasons to be angry and frustrated about not having control over his fate. And all this has been hinted at and brought up through the series. But the timing and execution of this here is suspect. Its too sudden and too unexplained. Regardless, I am still loving this series. I am eager for more. And maybe more context will be provided in the next chapter. This has been such an amazing read throughout. With that said, I might have called it. That this story would either progress in one of two directions. That either Jamie fully integrates with the network under Myriad and goes after the heroes. Or he gets caught and sent to the Tomb. So unless that white at the end here was Jamie's attack, it seems a prison break is coming.

Need need NEED a part two! A portion with Jesse and his dad in a 'session" together would be so hot. Please!

Thank you for recognition! Hope u will enjoy as I did in my fantasy, should you have any suggestions - I appreciate (with a private story tailored for you!)