Recent Comments

Bucca
7/22/17, 5:48 PM
More please, first part gave me a boner!
Anonymous
7/22/17, 3:38 PM
a little short, but a great setup for more....hoping you continue!!
Anonymous
7/22/17, 1:31 PM
Great start!
Anonymous
5/17/17, 11:55 AM
This story was so hot! I wish you could write entire novels of your stories! I'd definitely buy a book written by you.
Anonymous
4/16/17, 11:48 PM
Damn--this is really hot. I can't wait for more. Maybe have Ben eventually switch over from using his feet for conditioning to outright hypnosis? Whatever direction you choose to go, this is great.
Ryder
4/12/17, 8:19 PM
Uuugh such a great set up for an epic story!! Please continue asap ^_^
Anonymous
4/12/17, 3:17 PM
Please continue !!! Can't wait for the next part.
TimNJ
4/12/17, 11:56 AM
Oh this is so damn good, I can hardly wait to see what happens next!
nyjogger4e@aol.com
4/7/17, 1:44 AM
I found it! Great story that I couldn't forget.
nycboot
8/28/16, 4:57 PM
Whoa - wonderful story! Incredible writing: we know the sequence of suit take over, but each time it's done, it's done differently (with some elements the same or similar) - so that it never becomes boring but more enticing because it's different and we want to see how different, and also because we know of the inevitable end. Really, wonderful writing, wonderful story!