Recent Comments

8/30/24, 9:03 AM
I’m enjoying this series. But would you be open to a proofreader? There are many errors that detract from the story.

8/31/24, 6:30 PM
@[KinkyNickInSea](/user/show/17305) Sorry I’m dyslexic so I cant always see the errors even if I re-read it twenty times 😂 as to your question, I’ll think about it.

9/19/24, 7:40 AM
@[Caged_Writer_Boi](/user/show/10050218) I enjoyed the story and usually am pretty aware of errors. In this case I don't recall any, so i guess i can fairly say i didn't find them distracting at all. Perhaps my imagination was flying too high. Thanks for the story!

9/22/24, 9:58 PM
@[boi98229](/user/show/10027285) I'm glad you enjoyed it, I'll be revisiting this story soon with a new chapter.

4/1/25, 4:50 PM
@[Caged_Writer_Boi](/user/show/10050218) You and i have very similar submissive kinks. i absolutely loved 'Almost Perfect', which is now one of my absolute favorite stories, and my motivation for taking the time to create my first Curated List. Service is my pleasure, so if you should choose to use a proof-reader as suggested above, i would be happy to be of service to such a wonderful writer. (Personally i loved the story so much i read so fast to get the meaning that i didn't care what minor errors there might have been.)
4/1/25, 4:35 PM
I really appreciate the thought put into the hypnosis script. For me it makes the hypnosis and power shift feel more real, and the more real the hotter the story.
4/1/25, 2:24 PM
Hot stuff! Always nice to see more of this kind of stuff 😃

4/1/25, 2:40 PM
@[MstGay3000](/user/show/16188), thank you! Being an admirer of your work for some time, that means a lot to me. 😊🦶
hairyartist
4/1/25, 1:35 PM
I love it, thank you!
4/1/25, 12:34 PM
Nice story. Good opening heat. Looking forward to part two.
4/1/25, 12:17 PM
I’ve read a lot of stories on here, when I tell you I can’t wait for the next chapter I can’t wait!!
Zai
4/1/25, 10:21 AM
Wow! Great first chapter; setting the stage for the rape of Clark Kent and the ultimate domination of SUPERMAN! A future bitch for BBC! I hope you have Lamar eventually fuck Superman in his muscle hugging costume and skintight red briefs (which Lamar will call Superman's red panties). Have Lamar slit those red panties right over his Lilly White Cunt, so he can fuck the Man of Steel in all his costumed glory!
4/1/25, 8:14 AM
Sorry for the delay, for some reason it’s still waiting on approval for publishing.
3/31/25, 2:32 PM
Loving the concept.

4/1/25, 2:30 AM
@[Buster Red](/user/show/139530) Thank you! I'm very excited to explore it a bit more in the upcoming chapters.
3/31/25, 7:46 AM
Well, now this is intriguing... I'm looking forward to the next chapter, Bovine_Retribution!

4/1/25, 2:29 AM
@[Mindwinder](/user/show/296830) Thank you!! I'm looking forward to posting it