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8/25/25, 9:03 PM
Wait where's the rest 😭

8/27/25, 2:16 AM
@[Pogonophile](/user/show/10016025) Sorry... I have like a 50-story pile up at this point. But the actual plan is to write the second book of Reindeer Clause, then write this book.

8/27/25, 2:42 AM
@[Nocturne13](/user/show/263497) Haha it's all good, I know. I just enjoyed it so much. So far, I've enjoyed all of your writing greatly! Your style is just really cohesive and works well. Hope all is going well! <3
8/26/25, 9:36 PM
Mike and Slut Mike are starting to become one. Love that he finally gave his real self over to Josh. Also, when Josh considered teaching Mike how to Top...would love that. I think Mike could become a Service Verse ;) That thick cock needs to be put to good use. Can't wait for more hunks to join the mix.
BPB
8/26/25, 7:02 PM
Love the story! Kinda hope Markus becomes a son with Hayden too, im nervous he's gunna become like the guy outside.
8/26/25, 4:22 PM
We definitely need to get him using bigger toys or wearing a plug. Or Josh providing him with a special drink to help the study progress. Maybe replace the bed with a sling so while he's under Josh can be using his hole however he wants. Mike should also have some sort of body modification (chastity cage, nips pierced, PA, spiral tat, something). Mike should also become a poppers pig on top of all of the other inductions.
Anonymous
8/26/25, 3:49 PM
It's so hot how Harold transform Dean, corrupt him, humiliate and degrade him, now I'm curious what's coming for Travis. And btw there's typo in the end of story, Garold should be Harold.
8/26/25, 2:59 PM
So like one of the commands was you are a slut for guys who want to fuck you, it was a trained command, so of course Mike was effected and seduced by Travis. That part had me scratching my head. If you want to make it so only Josh is able to trigger Mike, then you have to make it so "only when I say the words will you go under" would apply. I actually said this is a previous chapter but the fact that anyone can trigger Mike is dangerous. Its risky. And it could lead to a bad end if found out by someone not Josh. The rimming was hot, nice presentation there. Would love more of it. The loosing control due to the pleasure was great too. I definitely want Josh to reinforce that Mike is supposed to be himself when not triggered because having a normal life is fun, and then he gets triggered and is a good slutty boi.
8/26/25, 2:53 PM
Wow. I wonder if Josh will feel confident enough to continue the programming without putting Mike under? And this is just a thought, but what if Travis and Josh start having a tug of war over Mike? Travis has done across Mike's triggers. Thigh it doesn't seem he won't need them anymore. That being said, Mike has essentially confessed to Josh so it maybe moot. Actually, what if Josh and Taylor double teamed on Mike instead?
8/26/25, 10:34 AM
This just gets better and better! Hope there’s more to come soon!
8/26/25, 10:34 AM
I hope this continues past week 2! Travis is a stud and I wonder what Josh will think of him...keep him as a Top for Mike or make him into another Bottom. Mike wants it all bad. I wonder what other hunks are lying around the Gym or Mike's Frat. Can't wait for Mike to describe the fuck to Josh and turn him on hardcore. Piss is not my thing, but had a feeling it was coming.
8/26/25, 6:09 AM
Wow, that was amazing! Can't wait to read the next parts!