Recent Comments

Anonymous
5/16/24, 9:16 PM
wow this is hot is there going to be more chapters?
Anonymous
5/14/24, 5:49 PM
Dam this was so so hot it's unreal loved the continuation and looking forward to seeing where you go if there is a part 3 I hope there is... maybe Mike getting taken down a peg or two in his usual bar

5/16/24, 11:23 AM
@Anonymous Thanks man. I think you'll like where this goes. But it might not be where you think.

Anonymous
5/16/24, 9:03 PM
@[JockTopper](/user/show/10015286) Oooooo now I'm super excited for where this goes now I love your work always get me going and it might not go where I think but I trust your work mmmmm
Morbius
5/6/24, 11:22 PM
I already want to see the other Tompson brother and I would like to see Eric in his police suit.

5/16/24, 7:10 PM
@Morbius We will definitely see Eric in his police uniform. I'm currently planning a few scenes for each of them at their places of work. We will eventually meet Peter the older brother. But it's going to be a bit. It's only Saturday evening and he won't be introduced until Monday.
Morbius Dunkey
5/6/24, 11:16 PM
I just read the entire story so far. The truth is that I liked it a lot, everything is very well thought out and now it is one of my favorite erotic sagas with the best script. I love the control that Jhon has over the father and son and the things he forces them to do that they don't like but that they enjoy at the same time. If I had to say only one thing that bothers and disappoints me, it is that the father still has a flabby and old body. I would more like to see Chris as a sexy dilf with a big ass and huge muscular tits. In my opinion, the scene of Chris and his son having sex would have been better this way. If it had been like that from the beginning I would be more excited, like Joe. But I only say this because of my preferences. I actually don't speak English, I'm reading your story thanks to the translator on the page. And this comment is translated from Spanish to English by Google. Sorry if something doesn't make sense, I just wanted to give my opinion. I hope you continue writing more of this erotic story.

5/16/24, 7:07 PM
@Morbius Dunkey It was never my intention to make Chris seem super overweight. I explain it a little more in the next chapter, which is processing right now. I hope everything translates well, I use a lot of sayings and phrases that hopefully translate correctly.
Anonymous
5/16/24, 2:32 PM
Can’t wait for more of this one 🤤 🤤 🤤
5/15/24, 11:22 AM
Fantastic story. Super hot. Can’t wait to read more.

5/16/24, 11:53 AM
@[Cracker](/user/show/10023984) Thanks, Cracker. Much appreciated.
5/12/24, 9:20 PM
Very exciting story. This is the first time reading any of your writings, but I'm hooked. Gotta go back and read the next chapter now. Thank you, Sir, for sharing with us. mikegay4u

5/16/24, 11:51 AM
@[mikegay4u](/user/show/451349) Glad you enjoyed it, boy.
5/12/24, 2:04 PM
So good!!!

5/16/24, 11:51 AM
@[NeedControlling](/user/show/1223696) Thanks boy.
4/7/24, 9:38 AM
Another fine piece of writing… you know how to put words and thoughts together in such an awesome way that makes my dick hard just anticipating what I’m going to read! Please please please SIR… keep writing more, don’t stop, I’m totally addicted

5/16/24, 11:50 AM
@[Frank1](/user/show/10000899) Thanks, Frank! I appreciate the compliments. Glad you're enjoying it.
Top+Bottom
5/16/24, 11:40 AM
"You would serve at my pleasure until I decide otherwise." Hottest line in this whole thing. Damn.