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4/13/24, 11:23 AM
I admit it, I waited until the whole thing was posted before I read it. It sure was fun to revisit the brothers and I wasn't surprised that Little Budd created catastrophic shenanigans. I enjoyed the throwback to the original cum hot tub debacle a great deal. Smokey is my favorite of the new characters!

4/13/24, 6:29 PM
@[amul](/user/show/10003734) "Catastrophic Shenanigans" should be the title of my memoir! Glad you liked it!
Mar 24, 2024
4/13/24, 4:28 PM
Hope this continues soon
4/13/24, 7:24 AM
Yeeeeeeees! The wait was very well worth it. Amazing job
4/13/24, 5:08 AM
The lights flickering was a coincidence. Oliver will help Remy find batteries once he’s done showering. --- Feels less excitingly framed bug eager hiw sioetgenius himbo who a megalawyer works. Also like idea of controllers desire making more than handle already with shades of thd himbo pheromones inducing dominance abd so on. Lose that if Remy got god pad back in full already
4/12/24, 10:46 PM
I love this story.
4/12/24, 3:25 PM
I was not expecting anything new from this. Also didn’t see it until now. I’m so happy you’re continuing. This chapter is a massive tease :) I vote for Remy getting the batteries and inviting the son over for some double fun. Two hypnocked hotties in jock straps is better than 1 :)
4/12/24, 3:59 AM
Are there still plans for a chapter 3?
sweet potato pie
4/10/24, 5:59 PM
though I wished for more horny scenes, I loved that this story is so, with a lack of word, plot driven! I just love the intricacies that this series has and I want this to be published, genuinely -S.P.P,

4/12/24, 1:20 AM
@sweet potato pie It's already at novel length. At the rate @NeonDemon is spooling this out, he may have a trilogy by the time it ends. :heart_eyes:
4/11/24, 4:56 PM
Hmm. I don’t usually leave critical feedback, but this chapter seemed strange to me. I really like the premise of this story, and I thought the first chapter was hot, but I missed having a little bit more descriptive sex scenes in this chapter. It came across to me like “He sucked my dick. Then he sucked my dick again. Then he licked my feet. Then my friend came over and fucked him. Then he licked my feet again. Then a bunch of my friends came over and fucked him 10 times.” Sorry to be negative about it but I thought this one had a lot of potential after the first chapter.